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However, if the university campus is open to tourists, the campus will no longer be calm, students also will not be able to concertrate on learning, as thus, the school also will lose its original significance.

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However, if the university campus is open to tourists, the campus will no longer be calm, and students will also  not be able to concertrate on learning. Thus, the campus will lose its original significance, either.

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